Well after receiving my paper back, I know now what I really need to focus on. Some of the stuff I could see coming the other just gets my brain going again. I missed some small things and a few big ideas. I just need to really be descriptive, I need to take the minor things and really really look at their reasoning and purpose for being in the picture. They don't just put things in they always have a reason for doing it and I need to find that out by going way into depth. Well I guess I just need to start and will all come in time. Id like to say as well last weekend of baseball this weekend, eveyrone should go.