After having my paper checked over I found out where I really needed to add more substance. I needed to really spend my time on reconstructing my introduction. It was lacking a few things but for the most part was pretty good for an introduction at this time. I also found out that I could really be a lot more descriptive about all of the things that are going on in my ad. I am a little to general and need to go in more depth. I had a few small grammar errors but most of my focus was going to be on the description and the analysis part of the paper. The length was just three pages so that was going to have to be lengthened as well. I think that my peer group worked well together and we did a pretty good job on helping each other out with our papers.
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